Bleeding Clouds Comments

I am so touched by your poem...it's just SUPERB! just the way you have used the words, and the metaphores, and the feelings, the way you have let them show through this poem...it's just amazing! Elya Thorn

Very expertly done. Modern poetry the way it should be written: detailed images pulling no punches. I especially like 'world of famishment, ' 'obscene were his lies...' 'obesity of heartache, ' and others. Thank you for sharing this. A ten from me. Martin

Wow! I don't know why you want my opinion Cam lam, you are a far superior poet than I could ever achieve. 10 from blown away, Tai