Bleeding Butterfly Comments

Can't wait to read more! a ten for me-shannon

You poem was really great and I can really relate with you to what your sying in this poem. Oh and by the why great word choice they are so vivid and it made a sence I really liked how you said you were a bleeding butterfly I have never thought to use anything like that. the closest I got to that was my poem called a hundred bleeding roses and a tender kiss. but I understand the emotion behind it. keep up the good work.