Wednesday, September 24, 2008

Bleeding Black Roses Comments

Rating: 5.0

The thorns from the red roses I received
Pricked my finger to make me bleed
As my finger bled red
The red roses turned black
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Jade DragonHeart
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Paige S 17 May 2010

That's pretty good! I liked it. It was dark, and the whole poem was a great metaphore. Nice work!

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Adrian Cordova 17 April 2010

Wow…that's deep, I love the persona of beauty(the rose) killing you, and then the true nature showing through the blood

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Allison W. 01 January 2010

That was deep...good work.

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