Monday, March 5, 2012

Bleeding Comments

Rating: 5.0

Heart pierced, fluttering listless and bleeding
why don't my tears stay in their housing,
they roll at the fleeting thoughts of my man having gone astray
why then would he write words with which he once used to sweep me off my feet up and away
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Yamini Khanna
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Jameel Ahmed Ansari 11 March 2012

extra torrential pain..shows the nature of pain endured in love..well written yamini

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Jessie Jett 11 March 2012

Hard to mend a broken heart. Your heart feels up and down. Confused. Time, Space Emotions merged together, to make it (your) heart flip Good.

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