Friday, December 28, 2007

Bleed... Let Go. Comments

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seeking for a knife.
planning to take this living soul away.
nice, sharp, shiny knife,
appears on the counter.
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Dislocated Heart
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Alisha Lonz 27 January 2008

your words...are so strong and sharp and beautiful. i felt tears welling up inside of myself as i read them. i truly adore this piece of writing. please, keep pouring your heart out in poetry. it is a dark yet wonderful thing

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Danielle Huffman 03 January 2008

This poem is the one that really touches my soul. I have a poem very similar to this called Bright Red Scream, please check it out.

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Make A Wish 29 December 2007

exactly wut i did. i love this peom

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