Wednesday, December 31, 2008

Bleed It Out Comments

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the tears fall and they turn red like scarlet drops of blood
he knows what is about to happen he tries to fight back
but it is starting to manipulate friends, family, and what
he sees through his eyes. now he gets weakened by
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justin walker
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hi i like your poem its was very good and has a darkness to it very good

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Leigh Parham 05 January 2009

pretty good! I've never heard of anything like it.

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