Friday, September 25, 2020

Bleed Comments

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He was ready to end the relationship.
But he was too cowardly to tell her.
So he had his new girlfriend break the news to her.
She slapped the new girlfriend hard in the face.
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Deluke Muwanigwa 25 September 2020

Good one. Howz about just walking away. The dork is not worth it

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Soran M. H 25 September 2020

Now she would make him also bleed.

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Soran M. H 25 September 2020

oh dear, it is a serious game but may be he didn't take into account the consequences of changing girlfriend, any way it is so nice poem talking directly about some important daily issues, thank you for sharing, have a top mark,5 stars with best regards

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L MILTON HANKINS 25 September 2020

Oh, my! This poem reeks of bitterness from a lost love. Good imagery, absolutely! It works!

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