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This seems so sad but filled with powerful emotions that seem to complicate me. I find I can relate to it cause the feeling of pain hurts but the pain you feel inside your head hurts even more.

i LOVE THIS! i know it feels i used to be there and self harmed and reading this brings a tear to my eye

A ease of your suffering. A tissue to try to dry your tears. Some courage to overcome your fears. Love is always near. Even when it feels so far away. The day will not easily be forgotten. No matter what the phase of the moon. A fall and rise, as tides surmise. With a loss comes a gain. Freedom from pain. With invisible ink another name has written. Time to make decision. With heart plucking all the feathers of ugly duck. Trying so hard to see the beauty not yet their. What is underneath that you yet don't see. A question of ones inner self indeed. I would like say your poem inspired that and I would like to thank you for it. Yours is a wonder poem, full powerful emotions. Keep writing you have a knack for it.

well wriiten...highly enjoyable =p

the word that caomes to mine is wow....think ineed to read some more of your work.: -)

Good poem well wrtten