Saturday, April 7, 2007

Bleak House Comments

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I used to pass it on my way to school,
an eerie place with a tumbled-down fence
and gates that groaned on windy days.
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jerry hughes
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Ivan Donn Carswell 10 April 2007

The master lyricist at work! Rgds, Ivan

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Alison Cassidy 09 April 2007

Love your use of Dicken's words in this lyrical and descriptive piece about your childhood. You paint your picture in rich Gainsborough colours - with an appealing shift of tonality in the last couple of lines. Excellent poem. love, Allie xxxxx

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Dan Hanosh 07 April 2007

Nicely done... The title got me, and the first line told me I wasn't mistaken. Thanks. Dan Hanosh Dreams Are Yours To Share

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Charles M Moore 07 April 2007

We all know that house, Nice one Jerry.

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