Monday, May 13, 2013

Blazing Memory Comments

Rating: 4.7

As the Shell

Dreams to have a pearl in it,
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Ashly Raju
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Valerie Dohren 19 May 2013

Some beautiful ideation here Ashly, a sweet poem. Enjoyed reading.

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Doug Bentley 15 May 2013

I am always amazed at how well you control your words. How you are able to string images that cohere, able to pin your thoughts, yet able to move easily over the page. You are so advanced for your age. It takes my breath away to imagine how you will write in the years, decades ahead - if you manage to conquer that most confusing, perplexing short era called the terrible teens!

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