Blazing Fires Comments

Great poem.....well done!

It reads even better the second time! Keep on penning my friend!

Pregnant with a passion that perfumes the atmosphere with an aroma of romance that runs like a river! Well done my friend!

your lips on mine our tongues entwined leaving behind all that is wrong forsaking where we belong releasing our intense desires passion revealed in blazing fires..beautiful poem full of romance and passion and eros....... thank u dear poetess. tony

An amazing romantic poem! I appreciate your lovely poetic expression: we belong/releasing our intense desires/passion revealed in blazing fires/extinguished only by our lovemaking/love that will never be forsaken! Top marks!

A lovely poem written with passion and it's so passionate...I vote 10++

OW a poem very hot. great; according to my wishes: sensual and wound up to striking

Exotically romantic. Lovely and very passionate. A smooth flow for joy. Thanks for sharing.

(continued) ....i might suggest switching the positions of lines ten and eleven, so extinguished will immediately follow blazing fires. this is a VERY 'HOT' POEM. well done! i'd rate it 9 3/4, but i only rate with a number if a poet begs me to do it. my comments act as my rating. the only thing which could improve my 'poetic' experience here would be a nice colorful photo of hot being performed, ................by humans preferably. bri :)

(cont.) ...you use forsaking and forsaken. it sounds to me as though you two each are 'supposed' to be in someone else's bed! ! ! but you are abandoning the 'rightful' beds and delving into a 'sometimes-forbidden pastime' of unfaithfulness to others, quenching your passions elsewhere. oh well! (cont.) ...

(cont.) ...the only possible thing i've noticed that might not be quite correct, English-wise, is yesterday's. i don't know if you are talking about remembering a group of past days aka yesterdays, or if you are talking about something that happened yesterday aka yesterday's....something. (cont.) ...

(cont.) ...a third of my way through the reading, my mouth 'fell open' and remained that was to the end. wow! very captivating/stimulating; i may have to excuse myself for a few minutes! ! ! to MyPoemList. (cont.) ...

i was looking a the several poems PH 'suggests' for readers to read (from you) and i was GOING TO READ: Give Me The Pen, which i still may, BUT then i saw this title and part of the first line** and i, OF COURSE, had to read this one! ! ** Blazing Fires As we kissed under the cool sheets our bodies.............yes! that will bring a 'old man' running to read, ........if nothing else. (to continued) .....

Both hungry for love! Thanks for sharing.

A sensual, passionate write.

This is really good, where emotional and physical love are as one. A 10.

Rainbow Flower your poem has caught fire inflaming all desires. A wondeful romantic write.+++10 Robert