Tears that are in my eyes
are not-Sorrow of barren Land
Where life barely exists
And sound of rain is lost in ocean of sand
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Lovely poem...so sad and touching..very sensitively penned
Is due to my inner sorrow // For the world I live in is crying dying // And am I not to grieve over something which is mine? ’ Excellent conclusion by an empathic heart! Pleas write more we want to read. Ten+ dr.sakti. Cordially invite to my page comment and… ds
'Tear in my eyes Is due to my inner sorrow' Rachel Ann Butler
dear aparna, the blast is a wonderful poem agony well expressed. the last para is the crowning glory. to know that you have written this when you were little shows up you as a upcoming poet with great future which i am seeing, thanx for shaRING.. voted10 surya
tears are wasted so many times for matters so trivial, ishould say your tears will not go wasted. very nicely written!
A LOVELY POEM...A VERY MATURED THOUGHT SO FULL OF LOVE FOR THE WORLD...AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN TWO...YOU GO ABOUT...WHY THAT SORROW SO WELL FROM DIFFERENT PERSPECTIVES..VERY WELL DONE
vow! a great and sensitive poem. indeed i appreciate your inner thoughts. a great and true poem which one is compelled to think ove. great and must confess i missed you a lot surya