Blasphemy Comments

an angry poem! I liked the content! ! ! Forbidden garden were planted with black roses Emitting smells of long gone corpses-----> you chose the suitable words 100% right...

All Hell breaks loose Somebody with empowerment and virgin Have to seal the floodgate --------------- he already unlocked the west side paradise door souls from the transmigrated land paced into the land a bright light arised

Striking imagery. Correct the grammatical mistakes and it gets a 10! Is English your first language?

Ideology’s desire to make its own canon and perspective the only acceptable choice results in intolerance and persecution as all other perspectives are denounced as heretical or perhaps even evil. Kind regards Aine

i really like the words used. i see it.... good job...

this is a very celestial poem, i think.....it has powerful diction, tone and apt imagery...so beautifully writen....i read it over and over and i loved it, a lot...Bravo!

More prophecy than poetry.You've certainly 'got it right'. Salaam!

i can understand the agony of the current scenario of spiritualism devoid of love and divinity....great piece