Wednesday, April 1, 2009

Blasphemer Comments

Rating: 4.0

exordium:
H.P. Lovecraft’s heretic pride.
She is suffering,
a girl disappearing into the thorns
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Paige Nielsen
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Kaitlyn Henning 16 April 2009

Very well written. I like the imagery.

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Catina Crum 08 April 2009

I enjoy how you begin and end with a single word. Beautiful imagery... 'marble lions roar amid the falling snow.' I'm in love with the image created in my mind. Your style is distinct, but I still think you are growing and transforming as a writer. : ] Exciting.

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