Sunday, December 13, 2015

Blankness Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am sitting, cold and numb
under a brimming sky
groping for words
that fly away from my reach
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Nosheen Irfan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 October 2018

Love, life, friendship joy, pain, death every word cheated me so let me catch silence......so impressive with nice poetic expression. A beautiful poem so nicely delineated. Thanks for sharing.10

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Daniel Brick 15 June 2017

This is a deeply felt poem that is perfectly balanced in its direct expression of a despair that (I believe) is about to be transformed. There is no trace of anger or blame in your poem. Your resolution in the second stanza is not to howl and to accept silence as a healing. You see your poem fills me with hope. Is that an unexpected reaction on my part? I feel this poem is written at the threshold of change.

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M Asim Nehal 29 June 2016

Outstanding......Sublime poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 March 2016

Cold and numb. But, with hope. Thanks for sharing.

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When silence is the only thing that make sense then in become a language for survivors. Well done my friend!

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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