Tuesday, July 15, 2008

Blankets Comments

Rating: 4.5

he is your security blanket
become unthread
yet you hold its remnant
you cover up from the cold
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Daniel Cook
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Kyle Shield Laster 15 July 2008

this poem sounds pleading. i like it. nice use of alliteration in line 10.

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