If you ever live
Incase I never be
Though in my memoir you did
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A lovely poem for your son...your blanket for you son would be suitable for many sons.Thanks for sharing.
what an awesome poem, i wish my dad woulda said anything like this. i truely liked it a lot. and very accurate and telling title by the way, it describes the poem perfectly. fantastic job :)
there is no better poem then that that comes from the heart My friend your heart has graced this page and I hope your sons heart
Poigniant, memorable and most definitely direct from the heart, i love this poem.
Nice simile poem....well expressed from a father with concern to the son....good write......10
Great title. A loving poem full of wisdom and sound advice for life.
this poem made me weep on the feelings of a father great poem dear
The trials and tribulations of life is difficult for everyone, more for some than others. But it's how we deal with these obstacles which makes us who we really are. Great write. Regards. Craig.
Yes, life tests our patience and sometimes the solution is a blanket. A blanket from a loving Father is the best blanket of all. A nice poem, I liked it...
The blanket is a great metaphor of wisdom and a beautiful gift from a poet father to his son, a wonderful dedication indeed...10/10. Best Regards. Naseer
The blanket is a great metaphor of wisdom and a beautiful gift from a poet father to his son, a wonderful dedication indeed...10/10. Best Regards. Naseer
good poem sir.. liked the innovative style and format.. peace prashant
Your son is lucky to receive such a good poem filled with wise words