Monday, December 14, 2009

Blanket For My Son Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you ever live
Incase I never be
Though in my memoir you did
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Abdullah Musa
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Brian Jani 26 June 2014

Your son is lucky to receive such a good poem filled with wise words

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 08 January 2010

A lovely poem for your son...your blanket for you son would be suitable for many sons.Thanks for sharing.

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Robbie Squires 02 January 2010

what an awesome poem, i wish my dad woulda said anything like this. i truely liked it a lot. and very accurate and telling title by the way, it describes the poem perfectly. fantastic job :)

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David Dale Kush 28 December 2009

there is no better poem then that that comes from the heart My friend your heart has graced this page and I hope your sons heart

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7he N0153 4nd 7he Fur9 28 December 2009

Poigniant, memorable and most definitely direct from the heart, i love this poem.

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C. P. Sharma 28 December 2009

A warm poetic advice from a father to his son. CP

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Ency Bearis 28 December 2009

Nice simile poem....well expressed from a father with concern to the son....good write......10

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Amitava Chakrabarty 27 December 2009

A nice concept and well depicted..well done! !

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Matt Mooney 24 December 2009

Great title. A loving poem full of wisdom and sound advice for life.

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Akram Saqib 19 December 2009

this poem made me weep on the feelings of a father great poem dear

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Craig Anderson 15 December 2009

The trials and tribulations of life is difficult for everyone, more for some than others. But it's how we deal with these obstacles which makes us who we really are. Great write. Regards. Craig.

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bye bye... bye bye 15 December 2009

Yes, life tests our patience and sometimes the solution is a blanket. A blanket from a loving Father is the best blanket of all. A nice poem, I liked it...

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Christina Phan 15 December 2009

great gift and advice. keep it up 10+ also it beautiful

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 December 2009

The blanket is a great metaphor of wisdom and a beautiful gift from a poet father to his son, a wonderful dedication indeed...10/10. Best Regards. Naseer

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 December 2009

The blanket is a great metaphor of wisdom and a beautiful gift from a poet father to his son, a wonderful dedication indeed...10/10. Best Regards. Naseer

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Prashant Shaurya 14 December 2009

good poem sir.. liked the innovative style and format.. peace prashant

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Miranda Stoltz 14 December 2009

That was beautiful. Great job.

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