Thursday, September 1, 2005

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Your eyes are the colour of water
but it is completely frozen over
and there is no way into your vision
unless I somehow warm you up first
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Genevieve Surrender
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Sejal Pachisia 06 September 2006

haha.. well if this is based on reality, i guess there's only one way for you to find out..

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Joy Vanderhelm 13 November 2005

Such sultry sesuality. Wonderful writing. Keep it up!

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Vidushi Khera 10 October 2005

it's beautiful.....please read Fire In Ice from my collection....kinda fits into the poem! ! LuV VidZ

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Kelly Allen Vinal 02 September 2005

Very nicely done - sensual - keep writing!

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Genevieve Surrender

Genevieve Surrender

Columbus, OH
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