Friday, August 25, 2017

Blank To Colours Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a blank paper was my mind
No pen was at hand to write expressions
All I Got was some colors to splash
I threw them all and made a mess
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Rini Shibu
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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 November 2017

So colourful so artistic.. an excellent little poem Rini.. Appreciated

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Rini Shibu 13 January 2018

Thank you so much Dillip for your encouraging words

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2017

Muse! As a modern art! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 12 September 2017

Thanks Edward... Hope your paintings going well

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2017

As a modern art! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2017

Sa a modern art! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Jeanette Telusma 26 August 2017

Wow..... I totally loved it, Rini. Thanks for sharing Art in poem form. Keep writing dear poet.

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Rini Shibu 27 August 2017

Thank you so much Jeanette..

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Muhammad Ali 26 August 2017

I couldn't approach your message until I read last line. beautifully said

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Rini Shibu 26 August 2017

Thank you so much Ali for your comments

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 August 2017

An imaginative poem so nicely painted. Painted in blank papar. Most interesting lines are... I threw them all and made a mess But it came out into a piece of art And I named it as a modern art. Morden art.. Thanks for sharing. Full vote.

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Rini Shibu 26 August 2017

Thanks Kumar, I am glad that you liked this poem

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The Crow 25 August 2017

I'm trying to think of some good things to say about this poem, but there are too many. So, I won't even try to list them. Good One Rini

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Rini Shibu 25 August 2017

Thanks John for reading this poem, I appreciate

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Lamar Cole 25 August 2017

This poem really made my day. I don't know if I will be able to stop chuckling after reading it.

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Rini Shibu 25 August 2017

Wish I could write like you, I am glad that you enjoyed

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Sanjukta Sahoo 25 August 2017

Forgot to evaluate.10++ for the lovely funny poem. Thanks for the share.

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Rini Shibu 25 August 2017

Thanks sanju for your comment for me as a poet

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Sanjukta Sahoo 25 August 2017

Like a blank paper was my mind No pen was at hand to write expressions All I Got was some colors to splash I threw them all and made a mess But it came out into a piece of art And I named it as a modern art How funnily you have punished these modern painters..I am of the same opinion too. They do it zigzag, But we are capable of drawing a conclusion out of it with a very artistic perfection. Thank you Rini for your honest expressions.

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Rini Shibu 25 August 2017

Thanks sanju... Though mind was blank I tried to add colors in it

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