Like a painter I run a brush
Over the canvas to blossom
The flowers of emptiness
In the garden of namelessness
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A fine poem, Abdul. A true example of your distinctive style.
excellent write Abdul. Sometimes it is difficult to fill the blank spaces of our mind. Each stanza is a poem within itself. in this poem you are laying yourself bare for your readers to read you. I love this wrte
well-composed poem...images set and lines are beautiful... the voice of so many...the imagery of painting is an effective tool of expression! ! !
Creativity-imagination-love-longing all woven gracefully.................good write.Thank you.
you take the reader on a journey through your mind seeing all these things in different places and different times. good write!
In the crowded street of despair - a great line, and a very bust street it is. Enjoyed reading.
Oh my goodness i love thins its sad but beautiful.