Monday, January 21, 2008

Blank Piece Of Paper.. No Emotions.. Comments

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i show no emotion.
my life is just a blank piece of paper.
unwriten, and unknown.
scars on my heart, arm.
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Dislocated Heart
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Serenity Prayer 10 June 2008

very good poem. i love it. i can totally relate. excellent.

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Wendy Collison 01 April 2008

Thats a really good poem! ! you shouldn't pretend to be happy it never really works..

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Chaotic Life - Curly M. 02 February 2008

oh wow is that how you really feel, you pretend to smile and pretend to be happy? ? oh wow anyways awesome poem i loved it..great way to express your emotions, even though you thought you didnt ; -P

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