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I love the point of view. and the truth about the indecision is very real. A+++ with a little smilie face sticker.

This is a great poem! There are just some words one can not bring themself to say because of how much he/she cares about that certain someone. You brought that message out nicely.

very good poem. sad and i can relate.

: (: (your poems are great Jem.. i agree with Jimmy

Great poem! Love to no how you came up with this stuff. I hope it's not real because it's so sad but keep on writing you will go far.