Blank Page Comments

Heyo. I've read two of your poems in total, and I feel that they're both really nice! I liked this one better though, thus I choose to leave my comment here. Firstly, I like your title. Hahs. 'Blank page' is an intriguing title, and i think that if I was actually choosing a poem from the list of poem titles, it would prove to be a much more captivating choice. This title gives a mysterious and unknown atmosphere to the poem that makes me want to read it. Also, I had rather liked the line in this poem that went: 'Everyday is a blank page How are you filling your canvas? ' It gives an added emotional feel to top up the poem. It's also a beautiful line, that expresses a feel even without a speaker. Like it lotts. Some ways in which you could improve would be perhaps trying to change your phrasing of the words so that it dosent occasionally lapse into the style of lyrics. Other than that, I would say that you're not bad, not bad at all, buddy. Hope you continue writing and contribute your beautiful phrases for the world to enjoy!

i realy loooooove it ur so honest i love that keep going best wishes with blue roses crystal