Tuesday, August 11, 2009

Blank Page Comments

Rating: 4.8

Here is a brand new page,
It was empty before I wrote on it today,
Just a blank piece of nothing,
No signs of life until I wrote something.
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ben burgess
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Lynda Robson 20 August 2009

You have filled one blank page with this wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it thanks 10 Lynda xx

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Lovely Mama 18 August 2009

you shouldn't feel blank because u r full of life... so b proud of waking up every morning with another day too spare! i loved it

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Larry Megazzi 14 August 2009

A great commentary on the creatrive process. The muse was working for you on this one.

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Polly Klomp 13 August 2009

Goddamnit Ben, we are so alike. It's almost scary! love it! !

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 13 August 2009

lovel thought and execution...you have done it beautifully...a poem on poem more than an empty page

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Catrina Heart 13 August 2009

Don't you know that a blank page means so much than a page with so many written words...thats the mystery of life and working brain...like an empty wall representing one's thoughts and feelings.........Lovely craft! ! !

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Laurel Larison 12 August 2009

very well written and expressed. It was different but something to think about. laurel

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Graham Russell 12 August 2009

very nice.... blank at first but then full of life at the end.

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Joseph Poewhit 12 August 2009

True communication---

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Silvia Jen 12 August 2009

blank page, clean slate, like a new beginning of sorts. the power of words indeed, strangers yet not so strange...

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Beauty Philosophy 12 August 2009

A well penned piece, nice flow all thru..you are welcome in the ocean of poetry.

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Carol Gall 12 August 2009

very nice ben you started with a blank page and...

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Sandra Martyres 11 August 2009

Nice piece Ben......and very true too

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