Friday, January 6, 2012

Blank & Mute Comments

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I have no idea where all thoughts disappear
The mind weaves dreams
Yet none materialize
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Shazia Rose
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Akhtar Jawad 05 August 2014

When fleeting of mind is active thoughts disappear but this poem is still a thoughtful poem,

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Rigzin Namgyal 08 January 2012

..you can't think of a single thing to say..as words are not coming... ..yet you said so many things..yet in few lines... ..beautiful write..i just loved it.. ..a masterpiece..way to go :)

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 08 January 2012

Religious terrorists in darkness suffocate you; make you mute.But being a teacher, be positive.

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Wahab Abdul 06 January 2012

simple thoughts in simple words ..very good...i like it please read my new poem 'who do i belong to? '

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Saadat Tahir 06 January 2012

that like a great poet......... creating a few lines that make sense out something that makes no sense well done be happy cheers

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