Wednesday, January 15, 2014

Blank Eyes Comments

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So bright and so shining;
Once were those eyes
Seemed within Sun rising
And heaven ever resting
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Denis Mair 19 May 2016

The poet turns aside from his own concerns to sympathize with the hopeless man. The poet's peripheral vision of hope sees the available source of light that the hopeless man does not see.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 17 January 2014

Many many thanks...............Roseann............I am very much obliged..............

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Roseann Shawiak 17 January 2014

Very intriguing and deep. I love it. Will read more of your poetry as I have the chance. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 17 January 2014

Many many thanks.............Ginger Faiery Princess................I am humbled..........

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Msforever Lonley 16 January 2014

very deep...... very inspiring... loved it

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 16 January 2014

Many many thanks.........Gajananji............

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Gajanan Mishra 15 January 2014

You are human my dear, great writing indeed. thanks.

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