Sunday, September 28, 2008

Blaming The Moon. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh ominous moon - - pale portent of doom.
White luminous disk, suspended aloft
Thick blanket of black shot thru' with bright
Shiny catseyes of light, coating in soft
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Fay Slimm
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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 May 2020

Ominous moon has mesmerized mind with extra-ordinary beauty. Unearthly glimmer we notice at deep night. Moon is hero of all creatures and moon sings the peace sing for all. We shall blame for moon-beaming at night with joy and reflection. This poem is outstanding poem...10

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Chuck Petz 10 November 2008

Been a long time since I read anything this romantic.Goosebumps! Chuck

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James Roberts 17 October 2008

A a real clair de lune, beautiful sensual poem,10/10

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Shimon Weinroth 12 October 2008

loonies at high tide, lovely mix of passion and compassion, reflecting reflections enchanting and urging 10 cheers Shimon

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Bob Blackwell 09 October 2008

Fay, this is truly a wonderful write, images of love under the celestial moon, how romantic, makes me wish I was back courting...walking down those quiet country lanes. Not really though when I think of all the trouble that was to come. 10/10 Bob xx

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Tess Rockenstire 08 October 2008

what a wonderful poem with full of imagery and emotion.

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Sandra Fowler 03 October 2008

The moon paints a magical landscape and you have captured its essence perfectly. Lovely poem. Ten without hesitation. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 October 2008

My love with 10 for this lovely poem on moon.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 01 October 2008

A lovers moon Madam la luna, is a Timeless lovers tune.. Andrew 10

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Lynda Robson 01 October 2008

Great poem Fay, I love poems about the moon and this is excellent,10 Lynda xx

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Rakhi Jayashankar 01 October 2008

yes ur ageless and your poems are timeless

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James Timothy Jarrett 29 September 2008

Beatifully full of passion and vivid imagery. Wonderully phrased. A 10 again Fay

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Kevin Eaglesfield 28 September 2008

You really know what you're doing, Fay and I bet you're so proud each time you write another.This one makes me hold my breath.Oh the illicit insanity.Best wishes.Kev

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Ency Bearis 28 September 2008

a very rare expression blaming the moon but with good deliverance..very nice and a wonderful piece... Ency Bearis

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Tom Balch 28 September 2008

you are an ageless minx Fay, great piece Tom 10/10

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Kris Smith 28 September 2008

Everything about this piece of work is perfection content, metre, feeling, Fay you are right you are ageless and passionate and a pleasure to read more please Chris 10 x

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David Threadgold 28 September 2008

Hi Fay. Where did this one come from. I dont think you can blame the moon it sounds to real to me. The pen writes from experience I think? or maybe a dark horse is lurking out there somewhere. only kidding a very nice peice well done **10** for sure. All the best Dave T

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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 September 2008

Yeah! Moon is so cruel to lovers. Beautifully expressed passion, love and disappointemtn.........................10+++++++++++++

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