Oh ominous moon - - pale portent of doom.
White luminous disk, suspended aloft
Thick blanket of black shot thru' with bright
Shiny catseyes of light, coating in soft
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Been a long time since I read anything this romantic.Goosebumps! Chuck
loonies at high tide, lovely mix of passion and compassion, reflecting reflections enchanting and urging 10 cheers Shimon
Fay, this is truly a wonderful write, images of love under the celestial moon, how romantic, makes me wish I was back courting...walking down those quiet country lanes. Not really though when I think of all the trouble that was to come. 10/10 Bob xx
The moon paints a magical landscape and you have captured its essence perfectly. Lovely poem. Ten without hesitation. Warmest regards, Sandra
A lovers moon Madam la luna, is a Timeless lovers tune.. Andrew 10
Great poem Fay, I love poems about the moon and this is excellent,10 Lynda xx
Beatifully full of passion and vivid imagery. Wonderully phrased. A 10 again Fay
You really know what you're doing, Fay and I bet you're so proud each time you write another.This one makes me hold my breath.Oh the illicit insanity.Best wishes.Kev
a very rare expression blaming the moon but with good deliverance..very nice and a wonderful piece... Ency Bearis
Everything about this piece of work is perfection content, metre, feeling, Fay you are right you are ageless and passionate and a pleasure to read more please Chris 10 x
Hi Fay. Where did this one come from. I dont think you can blame the moon it sounds to real to me. The pen writes from experience I think? or maybe a dark horse is lurking out there somewhere. only kidding a very nice peice well done **10** for sure. All the best Dave T
Yeah! Moon is so cruel to lovers. Beautifully expressed passion, love and disappointemtn.........................10+++++++++++++
Ominous moon has mesmerized mind with extra-ordinary beauty. Unearthly glimmer we notice at deep night. Moon is hero of all creatures and moon sings the peace sing for all. We shall blame for moon-beaming at night with joy and reflection. This poem is outstanding poem...10