Blaming The Birds For The Cause Of Silence Comments
Merry the day with joyful birds' song
On a tree it was but now its gone
Dont blame the birds for this silence
Dont blame the flying stone chase all of them
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GuessWho's back, not for long.... just seeing what became of a once unwritten soul... i see it's being written day after day..... writing about birds.. feels like these words are written for me.... i passed by another poem, once up a time i was not.. and i again felt i was being talked to..... byt the way, briefing you up on my life.... im currently in france completing master in fundamental physics (UPMC - paris)
Good to know you are doing well, yes its been a long time since we talk, i almost forget when was the last time we do...i know life is always busy to who living it...i am happy that you made it to join your dream comes true efforts..about these two poems, if you want to know just direct message me because it easier for us then. Dont know when we will talk again hahaha so i just hope that you will always find a way to make your life interesting and lively, keep it up and i just wish the best for you. Live your dream my friend
Yes everything is temporary and moves on and expires as your lovely beautiful poem expresses well. Thumbs up for your thoughts. Warm fond rhanx for your words on mine.
Don't blame the birds for this silence. This is common that guests come and go far. This is wise to survive life on our own feet. We are also like guests in this Earth and we are also supposed to move on. Very thoughtful poem is shared here....10
Yes, no room to blame them, I think that's we who made the birds move,
Yes, rather to blame lets look upon ourselves... Thanks mr Hassan for kind and your time.. You too keep on writing more in your page.
true...God bless whoever tried to make life better and we as better souls, In this blessing month hope is fertile like a great soil, we just need to help ourselves to make whole green..
Life is about moving. It's a continuous flow. So we shouldn't complain when something is gone. It's natural. We must move on with life. A very profound piece of writing. Well done.
Your comment is a beautiful thought and opinion as well, thank you for your words and time. :)
There is so much rich content here, Soul. The tree may stand as a metaphor for any group of persons, a long-standing institution, a country, a nation.....There will be times when the collective spirit is awakened by the melodies of visitors. They may come and go as the birds. But is it possible for them to find a home? A great piece, Soul.
You captured it so strong, i agree...thank you for being sweet and kind to my work all time..i do appreciate that MJ lemon..although the idea is about individual life but of course you view it greater and right thing...to see it as a country or community..another mint tea for ya
I really enjoyed how your thoughts flowed one from another - from one into another- - you took us with you so flawlessly on your journey to understand- -that is not an easy thing to do. Dont blame the birds They were our guests Guests come and go But we are standing as living trees Survive life on our own feet To hold strength and standing still- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Again, lovely lines and so flowing.... well-done, Soul!
Hi Susan, Thank youuu :) your poem always have a great flow too.. Keep smile and cheers. stay safe :)
The simplicity of the tree is symbolic to life in the sense of endurance, beauty and fruitfulness leading to aging and succumbing to death. A beautiful poem Soul...10+
You are so soft and kind to me, be whoever we can be no matter what people expect we are to be, sure we are better know ourselves...take care alwats Simone
beautiful poem and thanks, thanks for the hope you are spreading. words of hope might be fertilizer to the tree of human life.
Thats because you are a beautiful person, and you deserve to have great smile..because hope is around till the end meet our breath! :) keep happy with you
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7/20/2025 1:34:16 PM # 1.0.0
an interesting and philosophical poem about where should blame lie? ...............thoughtfully penned US