Blame It All On The Rain Comments

it rains love and passion inside this write...easily one of your recent bests...thanks...10

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, view and concept with the rest of us. You have given an interesting view to the rain combining both the softness of its gentle downpour to the wind blustering pelting rain when a storm develops. And also within this, you have begun to develop a character, a personality for the rain giving it, its own life. There were a couple of errors I found as listed below: First line you have, 'dropp' - should read 'drop' Fifth line you have, 'Onto to my out stretched hands, - remove 'to' Seventh line you have, 'notes' - reads better as 'note' Ninth line you have, 'raga' - should it read, 'rage? ' fifteen line you have, From distance... try From a distance 20th line you have, '...which has formed... try which have formed I also found imagery that began forming in this of two lovers who have set a time to meet, but the rain comes and turns the plans awry, for the rains are heavy and turns the roads to slush. From one view it has bought delay and from the other view it has bought freshness and new life. There was another thing I found and that was in some cases you have given a negative alongside a positive, to give description to the affects being witnessed, e.g. Like the strike of the lightning, Like the coolness of the shower, Very interesting concept indeed. Thanks again for sharing and many blessings to you. (PS sorry for the delay in replying to your email, but have had difficulty logging on)

The rain is awesome and anything can be stopped because of it's starting. Nice work of art

I enjoyed this piece because I love the rain.

I really like what you wrote. Its very interesting I must say. Keep up the good work.

well ornamented beauty. shan

lovely poem enjoyed reading it.thanks

What an intoxicating poem, fantastic! !

Another good one. Your imagery turned to beautiful words here. Great, Reshma

I saw the movie Blame it on Rio. This poem is even more beautiful! Great imagery

Two souls in tune with the rain. Very romantic. Lovely write. Warm regards, Sandra

Absolutely loved the words you used to describe the sound of the rain...made it almost audible. Nice work, Reshma!

very nice beautiful flowing poem...

Beautiful Reshma, a very enjoyable read, flowing like the rain, 10 Lynda xx

A beautiful well written Verse Thank you 10++++

wow i luv this one the creative you put into this was gd well done keep it up

i love rain alot, i like this poem, which is full of emotion and experss feelings, well write

wow that's really good writing, i really liked the flow of it. really nice peom! ! ! ! ! !

A nature poem that alerts all the senses and makes the reader feel part of the scene. Very nicely done, Reshma! A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

strong words a rain in thier own right