Now now look the rain stopped on its way
‘From the sky somewhere in between
Passing by are the winds blamed as well
Just because they whispered and yelled
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ill hedge my bets with dear indiraji... its very musical...the content excluded me from a peek behind the veil... did it atleast thrice.. and will come back maybe low sugar levels in ramadan...fasting yes indeeed lovely
Sounds a musical rendering...very descriptive....lovely
The use of images in this poem serves to intensify the impact of the composition..Splendid
yes, poetry is blameless....!