Friday, April 25, 2008

Blame Comments

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Placing blame on the germ
That sent my world into flames
Will not cure the hurt or justify
My self-inflicted pain
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Theresa Ann Moore
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Hemakumar Nanayakkara 04 May 2008

A marvelously worded meaningful short poem. By writing this piece you have conveyed a wonderful message to the readers.

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C.R. Clark 25 April 2008

I really like this piece, Theresa. I especially like the second verse. Self esteem is a necessary ingredient for happiness. Thanks for sharing a great write. Richard

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Ben Gieske 25 April 2008

Nicely put and very good advice. If we could only do what is best and do what we know is best or even good for us and others. Some things of this earth we can change and others we never will be able to change. Self esteem is the necessary first step as you advocate.

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Theresa Ann Moore

Theresa Ann Moore

Michigan, U.S.A.
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