Monday, June 29, 2009

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Rating: ★2.5

is it the pen
that I can not write
or is that the paper?
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Marton Dezso
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Alison Cassidy 01 August 2009

There is a Biblical feel to this one - a Judas moment, perhaps? I particularly like the second stanza 'is my mouth getting smaller'. All is relative is it not? By the way, I think you mean creator in stanza three. Your work is not overcrowded with words. I like that. Many poets say too much. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 29 June 2009

Excellent sir.....cheers with 10++++

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