Blake, The Equal Life. (Ft. Dear Mars) Comments

first of all i would like to thank you.this is really nice poem.i read it two times. Lets start from the end: the latest verse expresses the Anarchism in you thought.YES i agree whith you.we need the world without presidents, goverments, kings.. this verse(if we acted equally...) I love this verse more than the others.Yes if there were not any injustice, we would be happier and i think this is the goal which human being will seek. Your poem reminds me this statement by Conrad Aiken: What is life? a huge injustice? a monstrous joke? I hope it wont be an injustice. Godbless Nader

Ellias, Poems with rhyme and good thinking Will lead you to progress.

Mars sounds like a wonderful person and friend. I liked this joint poem, young Ellias.