Thursday, April 30, 2009

.......~blades Of Lies~....... Comments

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lies that in every word lies
between the letters the truth dies
and each letter becomes a blade;
that pierces your flesh till your soul fade
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rowan ahmed
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Mustafa Ghuneim 21 May 2009

I love the way you choose your titles, they are meaningful, and neat, creative, and innovating. :)

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~ Jon London ~ 01 May 2009

Lies destroy so many lives don't they, families broken, hearts smashed, trust forever gone, it shades the soul from what was once a bright light, they cause hing but heart ache.....the truth always finds it way

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Emily Core 30 April 2009

nicely said keep write

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