Blackheart Poetry Comments

wow, that was really strong. As Elizabeth Collins[comatose] said, I loved the lines: 'my life, my love my one embrace i lie, i lose i cause disgrace' good write ;) H&K's Jess ♥

I love love LOVE the flow of this stanza: 'My life, My love My one embrace. I lie, I lose I cause disgrace.' I got chills Beautiful -Ellie

Poetry is no normal skill Matthew! You expell the black of heart in this poetry, brilliantly...You ask, how can she stay? It's a love thing, some challenges are meant for those who 'Can' stay, no matter what passed along the way. Great job Matthew! Keep writing them out. Remember, no one is beyond saving. Smiling at you Tai