Sunday, September 27, 2009

Blackened Comments

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I see no life, no death
their is no now, no tomorrow
just where we are at the moment
with every step I take
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* Sunprincess * 11 October 2015

........much pain in this write....I feel little things can give much pleasure...family's love and friends love, also :) ★

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 13 October 2009

all lines in this poem reads as though written for me...used i was..left alone with pain i am..the best friend turning o worst foe did happen to me..blackened i feel

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Pandian Angelina 03 October 2009

Such beautifully true lines, I can not say, but Afraid to make a stand you hide from your rage reaching for the sky as you hunger for freedom still you don't feed You tell it as you see it and such powerful lines. Thanks for inviting me. Angel

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