Sunday, October 11, 2009

Blackened Heart Comments

Rating: 3.3

Smoke is everywhere
Deep breath
Inhale
Blow out
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i like your writing style

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Gold Fish 11 October 2009

Great description of the ill effects of second-hand cigarette smoke. The poem is cynical, sarcastic and sprinkled with irony. A nice witty poem. Thanks for sharing.

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