(- this is done in the tradition of 'Imagist' poetry, which was very popular in the 1910's and 20's... personally I still find it quite fascinating. - Smoky.)
- The blackest waters
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this is a masterpiece... can see what Patti was saying! well done!
Gosh, there is some magic in this, I don't know how you've done it but I am bewitched by this..(something about blackbirds stirs my imagination..?)
I totally agree with Eric and Patti, something very special about this piece.