Blackbird In September Comments

THE NEW PH FORMAT IS DISASTROUS. I THINK CLICKING ON PoemHunter.com, above, will take you to a page to write a complaint. I can't even send a message or make a search.

Last candle light gleamed in his glowering gaze.. i like that line Raven

2 - belie: " 1. (of an appearance) fail to give a true notion or impression of (something): disguise or contradict. 2. fail to fulfill or justify (a claim or expectation): betray. bri ;)

1 - Q, as you commented on my poem " Hard" , i say this about 'Blackbird In September': " Very well thought through and of. Somewhat beyond my feeble attempt to interpret, I fear. Perhaps the best works will always elude (me) . QtR' but...i guess i 'got the picture' i.e. got the gist of poem (cont.)

You dreamed a very sad dream of loss and love intertwined Excellent write, Quoth. Top marks

This is a well-crafted, tight little narrative. Thanks for sharing this.