Saturday, April 11, 2009

Blackbird And I. Comments

Rating: 5.0

A bundle of melody my blackbird.
Love- on- the- wing songster, piping his world
Into ecstacy, dawn to dusk. Noteworthy
Bird of large beak and eye, when tongue's unfurled
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Fay Slimm
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this is captivating.. i loved it..

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Fiona Davidson 11 April 2009

This is such a refreshing write Fay....brings the reader into the scene with your words....Fi10+++

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Sandra Martyres 11 April 2009

Charming poem Fay...singing a duet with a blackbird.

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Sue Sie 11 April 2009

Beautifully described..a duet....the birds sing wonders...lovely Fay..10++ Sue x

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 11 April 2009

this is the opposite of the raven by EAP wow nice words here u amazing!

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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