Saturday, June 23, 2007
Blackberry Comments
Rating: ★3.6
Hold your chain and read as you walk. A zombie
dragging his chain.
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Kath Moore
05 November 2007
5. Starts out ok, but then you tell the reader the point of the poem. Show, don't tell. Use the metaphor to explain yourself.
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Donna Robertson
03 August 2007
Speaks to everyone (well almost) but it's not woven and crafted as well as some of your other poems.
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9/11/2025 4:54:12 AM # 1.0.0
I like this one but it needs a little work on the wording.