Blackberry Summer Comments

Wow! This poem blew me away. I can taste the watermelon, blackberries and raspberries and see the lake just waiting for me to take a dip. Love it! A ten from me.

I'll make a wish and pray these days would last, The scent of summer rain o'er verdant grass. A beautifully written poem.I enjoyed it.

Well considering I, myself just ate a big bowl of mixed fruit and the only thing it was missing was berries but lo and behold here they are. So how about them apples? Well they are just delicious. As is this poem the first stanza had a few clever lines in it as well it was just a sweet poem. Sort of a succulent seduction if fruit could be made sexy. Well you've done it in this poem haha. Beyond that it really does take one to a spacious backyard laying by the pool enjoying a pina coloda while sun bathing and soaking up some rays. The wind greets your skin with a soft caress and the water beckons you to enjoy its space. Nice poem Ms laurent I can dig it.