Black Widow Spider Comments

Please check your grammar before you post. After all, if writers can’t use the right words, then who can? You used “your” (denoting something belongs to you) instead of “you’re” (describing that you are...) a few times. Just like with “their”, which means “they” own something/something belongs to them, vs. “they’re” which indicates ‘they are’.

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black widow spiders are dangerous little creatures indeed, in theses parts of the world where i live we're lucky not to have them.nice poem man

after telling eloquently 'enough' of the black widow spider, the poem beautifuly ends- the phrase 'pulling your soul from thee'...good write, Keith...i liked 10

Wow, this is very well written & oh so true.

It is so hard to believe you only started writing 2007. Your peoms are amazing. They captivate me. Well done. Really like this one alot.