Black widow spider
patiently spins
her web so inviting
she bids you
...
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Oh this is catchy, punchy, and well-imaged writing, Emma. And the finish is so well-made. A very cleverly woven poem, Emma, (yes, pun rather deliberate, but more importantly, sincere) . Warm regards and a mark of 10 from Gina.
A fine ending to a well written poem. Good job. Very creative.