Thursday, February 23, 2006

Black Widow Comments

Rating: 4.7

Black widow spider
patiently spins
her web so inviting
she bids you
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Emma Beverage
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William Jackson 29 July 2006

A fine ending to a well written poem. Good job. Very creative.

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Gina Onyemaechi 02 March 2006

Oh this is catchy, punchy, and well-imaged writing, Emma. And the finish is so well-made. A very cleverly woven poem, Emma, (yes, pun rather deliberate, but more importantly, sincere) . Warm regards and a mark of 10 from Gina.

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Emma Beverage

Emma Beverage

Roswell, New Mexico
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