Saturday, May 5, 2018

Black To Gold Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Trying so hard
To paint it gold
Comes out so blue
Leads to damn black
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Richard Wlodarski
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Rajnish Manga 07 May 2018

It is like self-exploration going 360 degrees or the life of a 24 hour day. It has much to ponder upon. Thanks, Richard.

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Richard Wlodarski 19 May 2018

Love your response, Rajnish!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 May 2018

Poignant with with hope at the end. Thought provoking beautifully crafted write. Liked the penultimate stanza.10

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Richard Wlodarski 19 May 2018

Rose Marie, I greatly appreciate your very positive response!

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Richard Wlodarski

Richard Wlodarski

France
Richard Wlodarski
Richard Wlodarski
France
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