So much pain
Putting the knife
To my wrist
It hurts just too much
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wow i can feel the darkness come flowing out of this poem. I can feel the pain. It was very good poem thanx for sharing.
i used to cut myself, i wanted to kill my self but each day i would tell myself no no yet maybe things will be better tomarow so i waited and hoped and after two and a half years of waiting and razors things did finally did get better and finally had the peace and happiness i'd longed for. i like this poem good work :)
Don't give up....it is very easy to slip into the darkness..I should know....keep writing...your words touch others more than you know^^....this poem is very intense i feel the pain..the wondering....the defeat.....much vivid i should say....a truly good one^^
hey i LOVE this poem! that was great. keep writing hun.