Black Swan - Evening Song Comments

Lovely piece. I can imagine the scene.

Were you happy when you poeted about the Black Swan...? Or you had something sad... You wanted it To fly with thee black wings...! Very thoughtful...!

A very lovely poem here Danny - beautiful to imagine the scene.

Hello.. I ummed and arrred over this or the ribbon write but landed here (glad I did too) you lay beautiful harmonious evening song visuals here. Amongst the dusk I could see the swans slowly gliding leaving behind one of my favourite descriptions in a long time! (Slipstream waves silver wedge, Crest the tide on evening's edge) stunning... There is not one thing I would wish to change and I love the way you set up the continual cycle of life (day through to night) a great tie up to the piece.. Thank you Karen

Liked this one. We too have black swans in our park in Hagerstown so, of course, I had to read this one. Adeline

Pretty. I remember I was in the countryside once and I saw a black swan skinning across the lake, how my heart leaped at such a beautiful site! They really are amazing creatures, aren't they?