Wednesday, January 25, 2012

Black Star Comments

Rating: ★4.2

Black Star, Black Star
I wish I'd know where you are.
I need a wish, to help me out
in my dark world full of doubt.
...
Read full text

Ashley Bachtel
black star dark
COMMENTS
Robert Price 22 February 2012

Nicely done. I like the rhythm and the verbs until falling asleep. Paints a nice picture.

7 2 Reply
Dave Walker 25 January 2012

A great poem, like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, An Angel Cries.

7 2 Reply
Load More...
Ashley Bachtel

Ashley Bachtel

Canton, Ohio
Ashley Bachtel
Ashley Bachtel
Canton, Ohio
Poet's Page Poems More
Close Activity Quotes Biography Following Followers Statistics My Profile Add New Poem Add New Quote
Poemhunter.com
 Best Poems Best Member Poems Best Classical Poems New Poems New Poets Best Member Poets Best Classical Poets Explore Poems Explore Poets Poem Of The Day
Poems About
 Love Poems Baby Poems Death Poems Sad Poems Birthday Poems Wedding Poems Nature Poems Sorry Poems Hero Poems Poetry E-Books
Best Poets
 Robert Frost Maya Angelou William Shakespeare Pablo Neruda Langston Hughes Emiliy Dickinson Shel Silverstein William Blake Rabindranath Tagore William Wordsworth
Best Poems
 Phenomenal Woman Still I Rise The Road Not Taken If You Forget Me Dreams Annabel Lee Caged Bird If Fire And Ice On The Death Of The Beloved
Poem Hunter App Store
PoemHunter Facebook PoemHunter Twitter PoemHunter Instagram
About Us Copyright notice Cookie Policy Privacy Statement Contact Us Help Report Error Is Poem Hunter a legit site? Is Poem Hunter safe? Comunity Rules Privacy Policy Legal Terms Of Use

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

7/22/2025 8:42:55 AM # 1.0.0

Close
Error Success