Black Soul Comments

Dear Sir Ernest, Wow, great poem. Very emotional and powerful poem sir..... Discrimination in nationality, race and ethnicity can not be controlled, because it is actually a nature of human being...What matters most is the goodness of heart and soul that only God can see it.......Thanks for sharing this poem sir.. Sincerely, diane

Glad you did Sister. thanks

beautifully written, i enjoyed it...

thank you for your comments good people NGC JIYA

Great poem with true sentiments and spirit. don't give up for I am a black soul as well. Remember man was made out of the dust of the ground. The best soil is black soil. Rich soil. Keep writing You are headed to the top.

Competitive! But, we are all human beings on earth. Thanks for sharing.

A soul can't be black; it is the core of a human being and it is where God resides. It is the negative thoughts that are black; these are what you should fight and banish from your life.

we work yet our efforts goes to waste, wash the pain yet stains remain we talk yet our words are ignored im sure we are seen yet too dark to be saved these lines are a killer bro...well written poem indeed. I'm sorry I took long to read and comment on it.

We sometimes come under the trap of negative feelings like doubts, and frustrations when life looks heavy and burdensome.We loose faith in ourselves.Our soul becomes black soul loosing all jest for life.We should not let ourselves come under this trap.We have only one birth and so live it joyfully.

Deep inside there is this wonderful spark. When we take the time to see a beautiful flower, a wonderful sunrise, that spark tends to become a small flame. If we allow the cool breeze of love blow a bit of oxygen in the small flame it may become a fire, that gives wonderful warmth and light to our soul. Another nice poem filled with deep thoughts and poetically expressed.

thank you guys for the input im blessed by your work too hope you'll enjoy my other pieces too

Sometimes we are caught in the tangles of darkness! We feel there's no way out, but if we try earnestly to get out of that darkness, we might find a way to light! So never give up hope! Such feelings of depression are quite natural to everyone at one time or the other in life! Powerfully put!

How can I find a way in the dark- philosophical one, , thanks.

A good story line well presented and expressive showing how one feels when darkness overtakes us. Well thought out and with some drama t o add to the poem. Well done.