Thursday, January 10, 2008

Black Slates And Cobblestones Comments

Rating: 5.0

On black slates and cobblestones
The sooty rain falls,
And the long rows of terraces
With stark red brick walls,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Ben Paynter 30 April 2008

i'be been reading through some of your works lately and you certainly have a way with words. it's nice to see someone who can rhyme while still making it sound smooth and effortless. this poem stuck out to me though and i love it...great stuff. ben

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Duncan Wyllie 29 February 2008

I don't know what it is about your poetry Andrew, but when I read it, it somehow feels familiar to me, like a long lost piece of work that I had previously treasured, now found Love duncan X

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Ernestine Northover 26 February 2008

A lovely poem going full circle. Rhythmic reading and a wonderful storyline. Imagery all captured here in all its bleakness. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Jeannie Ann Clark 14 January 2008

Very nice writing, again. 10 again from me. I wrote a new one, 'Walk Into A Castle' and others. I search for yours...thank you...keep writing and publishing!

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